Originally Posted by Deweyoxberg
When does it go out Sor?
I'll post it in a couple of days. If no-one does the pics, that will take a little time.
- Cleaning up the commas (sorry; I am quite picky with them)
- A few words missing in some of the sentences which breaks the context
When I was a kid, one of my teachers was very picky on commas too. That taught me well. I'll have a look at them but you are welcome to point out where you think they should go. Duck's style of writing doesn't always allow for the conventional comma rules to be applied.
Yes, there are a few more phrase edits that are required. I noticed them after posting. I also saw two dreaded apostrophe mistakes I left in (and probably caused), shock horror!
Believe me, I never expect things to be write in the first draught.