Promotion article for our Mindcrack server

[DarkDuck]

OMG you've ruined it, you fat stupid hobbits!!!!!!!!!


Nah, it's fantastic thanks Sor, i am a writer now lol

[Deweyoxberg]

When does it go out Sor?

Minor tweaks:
- Cleaning up the commas (sorry; I am quite picky with them)
- A few words missing in some of the sentences which breaks the context

Positives:
- Wow. That is one heck of an article.
- SHARKS! Enough said.
- It is simple and to the point yet offers "just enough" to tease the curious

[Sorontar]

Originally Posted by Deweyoxberg

When does it go out Sor?

I'll post it in a couple of days. If no-one does the pics, that will take a little time.

Minor tweaks:
- Cleaning up the commas (sorry; I am quite picky with them)
- A few words missing in some of the sentences which breaks the context

When I was a kid, one of my teachers was very picky on commas too. That taught me well. I'll have a look at them but you are welcome to point out where you think they should go. Duck's style of writing doesn't always allow for the conventional comma rules to be applied.

Yes, there are a few more phrase edits that are required. I noticed them after posting. I also saw two dreaded apostrophe mistakes I left in (and probably caused), shock horror!

Believe me, I never expect things to be write in the first draught.

Sorontar

[Sorontar]

Okay, almost finished the article. I just need two images - one of some of Mo's Creatures and one of a quarry setup, showing the frame, engine and piping and anything else near it. A little bit of elevation helps so the quarry space can be seen.

Anyone have a shot on hand?

Sorontar

[Sorontar]

Okay, the article is up - TOG MindCrack - Mining, Machines, Magic and Mobs | Minecraft | TOG - The Older Gamers. Thanks to Duck for writing it and Obsi for supplying with the photos.

If you see any fixes it needs, just say so.

Sorontar